OpenAI’s AI Struggles with Creative Writing, Evokes High School Fiction Club Energy

OpenAI's new AI model attempts creative writing but delivers clichéd, artificial prose.
Matilda
OpenAI’s AI Struggles with Creative Writing, Evokes High School Fiction Club Energy
When I was 16, I attended a writing workshop with a group of precocious young poets, where we all tried very hard to prove who among us was the most tortured upper-middle-class teenager. One boy refused to tell anyone where he was from, declaring, “I’m from everywhere and nowhere.” Two weeks later, he admitted he was from Ohio. Image:Moor Studio / Getty Images Now — for reasons unclear — OpenAI appears to be on a path toward replicating this angsty teenage writer archetype in AI form. CEO Sam Altman posted on X on Tuesday that OpenAI trained an AI that’s “good at creative writing,” in his words. But a piece of short fiction from the model reads like something straight out of a high school writers’ workshop. While there’s some technical skill on display, the tone comes off as charlatanic — as though the AI was reaching for profundity without a concept of the word. The AI at one point describes Thursday as “that liminal day that tastes of almost-Friday.” Not exactly Booker Prize material. On…